Counting With Barefoot Critters by T. White

Authors

  • Leslie Aitken

DOI:

https://doi.org/10.20361/G2C39H

Abstract

White, Teagan.  Counting With Barefoot Critters. Tundra Books, 2016.

White’s counting book for young children begins with a good concept: make them want to turn the page.  She accomplishes this by leaving a rhyme unfinished for want of a number that the listener must volunteer.  This is a clever technique and will, undoubtedly, produce engagement.  Unfortunately, White is not an effective poet; the rhymed couplets comprising her stanzas fail to exploit the power of verse for children.

English is a language with stressed syllables.  Rhythm, the arrangement of non-stressed and stressed syllables within a poetic “foot”, can draw attention to key words and concepts.  It can also facilitate memory.  For early readers, it can be a key to pronunciation.  Combined with witty and inventive language, rhythm creates humor and/or suspense. (Theodore Geisel, “Dr. Seuss,” set the bar quite high in this regard.)  Rhythm and foot in poetry can contribute to a child’s understanding of beat and measure in music, inviting a physical response.  

Too often, the couplets in White’s work sound rhythmically forced, as in this example-- which, incidentally, also fails as a pronunciation guide:

            “Surely we’ve earned a nice, peaceful rest

            Now that we’ve finished our daring conquest.”   (Eight, [p.15])

Flaws such as this weaken what could have been a superb book.   White’s colored drawings are enchanting.  They are detailed enough to invite the joy of discovery, but not so cluttered as to confuse.  Her “Barefoot Critters” are adorable.  The map that introduces their adventures is easily followed by the intended audience and is another clever way of inviting children to learn a number sequence.  

None-the- less, literary quality and artistic excellence should go hand-in-hand in books for children.  Counting With Barefoot Critters has much of the second, and not quite enough of the first.

Recommended: 3 of 4 stars
Reviewer: Leslie Aitken

Leslie Aitken’s long career in librarianship involved selection of children’s literature for school, public, special, and university collections.  She is a former Curriculum Librarian at the University of Alberta.

 

Author Biography

Leslie Aitken

Leslie Aitken’s long career in librarianship involved selection of children’s literature for school, public, special, and university collections.  She is a former Curriculum Librarian at the University of Alberta.

Published

2017-07-31

How to Cite

Aitken, L. (2017). Counting With Barefoot Critters by T. White. The Deakin Review of Children’s Literature, 7(1). https://doi.org/10.20361/G2C39H

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Section

Book Reviews